tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8639076133899625777.post538780912620475036..comments2023-10-25T16:33:56.428+05:30Comments on MOTIFS ON THE WALL: SILENCE..Motifshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11298088181053343977noreply@blogger.comBlogger32125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8639076133899625777.post-69839015206782519462011-07-24T21:42:23.799+05:302011-07-24T21:42:23.799+05:30Thank you so much for your wonderful comments and ...Thank you so much for your wonderful comments and the immense love you have all shown...any kind of pain is worth it.because I have such a great support system...Alpana Jaiswalhttp://www.motifsonthewall.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8639076133899625777.post-83060030285834862332011-07-20T12:10:51.712+05:302011-07-20T12:10:51.712+05:30This is written with so much pain, and of course t...This is written with so much pain, and of course the hope of finding the shine through another smile. Very well written. Silence, at times convey the message louder than any words may fail. You have portrayed this poem really well. Cheers!N Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05838020467882677011noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8639076133899625777.post-77349943515252347682011-07-19T13:03:45.103+05:302011-07-19T13:03:45.103+05:30When a tree falls in the forest and nobody is arou...When a tree falls in the forest and nobody is around to hear it, does it make a sound? <br />When tears fall from a yearning heart and nobody is there to wipe them do they go unnoticed?<br />Tears speak louder than any shout ever could and someone somewhere is always listening.<br />Lovely poem Alpana. xoxoAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8639076133899625777.post-15368828023280428582011-07-19T02:16:55.973+05:302011-07-19T02:16:55.973+05:30The release of tears is usually a good thing, it&#...The release of tears is usually a good thing, it's a sign of moving on. Yet these sorrowful words in their movement stay put, each tear holds fast not releasing but tormenting, a fixed reminder of was and what is. <br /><br />Powerful words Alpana oxoxPapercut Dollhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15464641582104501391noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8639076133899625777.post-40760585379030888022011-07-18T17:03:45.555+05:302011-07-18T17:03:45.555+05:30oh how i have missed your blog lady, so touching a...oh how i have missed your blog lady, so touching and brings back emotions i have buried in the past.baldychazhttp://www.baldychaz.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8639076133899625777.post-81614631035204031592011-07-18T15:28:24.284+05:302011-07-18T15:28:24.284+05:30Hi Alpana,
Very well expressed the pain within , ...Hi Alpana,<br /><br />Very well expressed the pain within , and also the flow is also nice.<br /><br />Sad, but emotions are well expressed though silently but emotions are better expressed when we write and u did it :)<br /><br />Take care.<br />ATB :)Vivekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11080777013481305584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8639076133899625777.post-78772094119696958982011-07-18T10:29:10.600+05:302011-07-18T10:29:10.600+05:30you write hurtful poems and it can even make the r...you write hurtful poems and it can even make the reader cry such sharp words/phraes..nice blog by the way<br /><br />good luckBhavnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03551339119349050916noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8639076133899625777.post-29770321524502849242011-07-18T00:54:18.995+05:302011-07-18T00:54:18.995+05:30Alapana, I know this poem is meant to be for someo...Alapana, I know this poem is meant to be for someone and you have expressed the pain and waiting in this poem so lucidly. Very expressive. Loved it.Rimlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04800381730067608251noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8639076133899625777.post-60417745114498722592011-07-18T00:04:28.003+05:302011-07-18T00:04:28.003+05:30hope this is just a poem!hope this is just a poem!joshi danielhttp://joshidaniel.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8639076133899625777.post-12917093279257517292011-07-17T22:06:18.258+05:302011-07-17T22:06:18.258+05:30Grief of any kind is painful. Part of healing is e...Grief of any kind is painful. Part of healing is expressing the feeling. Something you do beautifully.<3photos by janhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04931922143998773384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8639076133899625777.post-50340316064671726942011-07-17T21:03:54.666+05:302011-07-17T21:03:54.666+05:30This is such a deep poem and I feel like crying wi...This is such a deep poem and I feel like crying with you! Such a terrible feeling to let go...Nelietahttp://nelietatravellingadventures.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8639076133899625777.post-7621066855067525612011-07-17T19:16:22.675+05:302011-07-17T19:16:22.675+05:30Sad and deep poem - Please tell me this was just f...Sad and deep poem - Please tell me this was just for the sake of this post...Kritihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06827714509776261027noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8639076133899625777.post-75998295380197684892011-07-17T18:28:30.396+05:302011-07-17T18:28:30.396+05:30Being alone is one of the hardest feelings. It can...Being alone is one of the hardest feelings. It can numb the heart. But you have all you need to find joy, self-worth and love...you have the amazing soul that consists of you, and you have the presence of God already in your heart. I'm praying that His presence unfolds itself within you like a flower unfurling. Releasing a joy, peace and happiness that dries up those tears and perhaps produces new ones...ones of healing, sweeping away the pain and leaving your heart free and clear for new beginnings.Jessica Mhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02450820269367184046noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8639076133899625777.post-12375757267876894952011-07-17T16:04:01.311+05:302011-07-17T16:04:01.311+05:30pain hurts....pain hurts....hansikanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8639076133899625777.post-90665065278224020392011-07-17T09:58:38.519+05:302011-07-17T09:58:38.519+05:30Keep me away from the wisdom which does not cry, t...Keep me away from the wisdom which does not cry, the philosophy which does not laugh and the greatness which does not bow before children. ~Kahlil Gibran <br />To Alpana, a beautiful soul writing heartfelt verses.Debrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02273349436461781371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8639076133899625777.post-54140769783003167502011-07-17T03:41:29.643+05:302011-07-17T03:41:29.643+05:30why didn¡¯t I come across this article earlier!!! ...why didn¡¯t I come across this article earlier!!! pretty useful!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8639076133899625777.post-84917088222350609772011-07-17T02:40:33.570+05:302011-07-17T02:40:33.570+05:30poignant.. :(
Weakest LINKpoignant.. :(<br /><br />Weakest LINKRachithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09671194017987611900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8639076133899625777.post-60645524031933390082011-07-17T00:35:22.550+05:302011-07-17T00:35:22.550+05:30I feel the pain..I understand it..I am here....As ...I feel the pain..I understand it..I am here....As always...XOXOXXOBongohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09476508632697640785noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8639076133899625777.post-88447176792661078982011-07-16T22:43:56.056+05:302011-07-16T22:43:56.056+05:30Alpana...if this loss brings so much pain, it is n...Alpana...if this loss brings so much pain, it is not worth the sorrow...you have so much to give. You are a gifted writer, powerful words, coming from experience. This is how you heal. I too feel your pain and sadness..it is a pain to the core. You must have loved so deeply. Now give this love to yourself. Every comment on this post is a pearl of wisdom to help you to move throught this. So much love and caring coming to you. I too have lived this and I am here to tell you.."This too shall pass". You are destined for better things...only when you let go can you begin to attract that which you seek. I am here for you...anytime. Know you are loved!ravenmythhttp://ravenmyth.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8639076133899625777.post-91066189923580148392011-07-16T21:54:07.549+05:302011-07-16T21:54:07.549+05:30I felt it's all about my life and sadness too,...I felt it's all about my life and sadness too, which is hidden in silence and missing someone too. <br /><br />I can't say anything more, but I know you can understand and feeling the pain too.Mohini Puranikhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11971969513354282016noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8639076133899625777.post-25259107261029132742011-07-16T21:19:36.041+05:302011-07-16T21:19:36.041+05:30A Touching Silence !A Touching Silence !Simranhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01931908983809822868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8639076133899625777.post-61486401837751791932011-07-16T20:22:34.941+05:302011-07-16T20:22:34.941+05:30Another touching poem... I don't know if I hav...Another touching poem... I don't know if I have mentioned this before but when I read some of your poems and writings I walk away with tears streaming down my face not only can I feel the pain you write about... but it reminds me ...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16972739790941695481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8639076133899625777.post-18218480418642965092011-07-16T19:45:53.762+05:302011-07-16T19:45:53.762+05:30LET YOUR TEARS BE THE RAIN.THE HEAVY HEART NEEDS T...LET YOUR TEARS BE THE RAIN.THE HEAVY HEART NEEDS TO DRIZZLE,WIPE AWAY YOUR PAIN,CLEAR YOUR EYES TO SEE THE BRIGHT LIGHT THAT THE FUTURE HOLDS, THE BEST ALWAYS DESERVES THE BEST.SO THERE IS YET SOMEONE TO CARE, HOLD YOUR HAND AND WALK WITH YOU IN YOUR EVERY SPHERE,YET SOMEONE TO TRANSFORM YOUR TEARS OF LONELINESS TO TEARS OF CARING AND HAPPINESS. <br /><br />I HOLD YOUR HAND AND PRAY TILL YOU MEET THE DESTINY THAT MAKE YOU SMILE ALL THROUGH YOUR LIFE'S REST.fantasy in practicalityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15932867975865917633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8639076133899625777.post-45267482982682125062011-07-16T19:42:48.625+05:302011-07-16T19:42:48.625+05:30Heart,we will forget him!
You and I, tonight!
You ...Heart,we will forget him!<br />You and I, tonight!<br />You may forget the warmth he gave<br />I will forget the plight!<br /> .....Tears are more valuable than pearls,please don't waste them on those who don't deserve even a simple,'Hi'.<br /> ...PORTIAAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05500916978792339963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8639076133899625777.post-21341277188053721102011-07-16T19:34:10.873+05:302011-07-16T19:34:10.873+05:30alpana let the tears roll close your and look thro...alpana let the tears roll close your and look through the fog see you love that are there feel the love they have for love let your soul heal with the love that is with in. god bless this is great and wonderful poem.Roy Durhamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14834208730553747847noreply@blogger.com