Thursday, January 5, 2012

HIS TOUCH


HIS TOUCH



He asked me:”How would you like me to touch you?”

I answered:  I would like you to touch me as if you were going away tomorrow, far, far away, and you wanted to remember the feel of my body, the texture of my skin, the very essence of who I am.

I would like you to touch me as if you gained your nourishment through your hands. Feed on me, drink deeply, and draw from your touch the love that I hold for you.

I would like you to touch me as if you were feeding me through your hands, as if by your touch I am nourished and sustained. Every inch of me cries out for your touch, yearns to be fed.

I would like you to touch me as if your hand were a feather, lightly caressing the edge of my being.

I would like you to touch me as if your hands were paintbrushes, and as you caress me, you are coloring me in your own sparkling, dazzling hues.

I would like you to touch me as if you were erasing the outer me, allowing me to reveal my inner self to you.

I would like you to touch me as if you had carved a sculpture and were now feeling its finish, smoothing out any rough areas.

I would like you to caress me as if I were made of dry clay, and by dampening my skin, and moulding me like you want me to be.

I would like you to touch me as if my skin were soft velvet.

I would like you to touch me as if you were a musician, and your touch brought forth different sounds from different parts of me.

And I would like you to touch me as if I were your Lover…………

Copyright:@Motifs2012
Labels: Touch, skin, music, lover
Picture: Courtesy Google Images










66 comments:

  1. I would like you to touch me as you are a lover of my love that never gone away from me anytime...


    Awesome...!

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  2. Such profound beauty in words is like a lovely collage of flowers!What a marvelous touch!

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  3. Alpana I am at awe...Vow!!
    Such guys are in dreams only I guess....can they ever realy love a woman like dis...phew!!

    I am yet to feel this touch...

    This was pure n full of beauty!!

    "I would like you to touch me as if you were a musician, and your touch brought forth different sounds from different parts of me."

    Damn d beauty of these lines....

    God Bless!!

    Love
    Mani

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  4. Lovely!

    "I would like you to touch me as if you were erasing the outer me, allowing me to reveal my inner self to you."

    My favorite lines. . .

    I hope to meet a man like this someday :-)

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  5. Am speechless! This is soooo beautiful. I had goosebumps reading this.

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  6. Beautiful and very sensitive !
    I would like you to touch me as if you can give me few more heartbeats! :)

    Love this one...
    Love you! :)

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  7. This is music to my ears Alpana. To have your lover touch you like that! Oh bliss! What a beautiful start to my day. I will be imagining that touch!

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  8. Hello.
    I am breathless reading these words. The woman who says this to her man will send him into an erotic frenzy for sure (smile).
    Nothing like a caress...or two...or three...or...mmmmmmm!

    Vividly sensual & pleasurable.
    Thanks for sharing & visiting. Always look forward to your treats at my blog.

    For Mani...yes, we may be few & far between, but such a man exists in my image. LOL!

    Golden Footprints

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  9. I just couldn't resist to take a quick break to comment on this.

    It gave me that 'breeze' you gave me with the fist love poems you've created. This one's woven by a very delicate heart. Nobody could ever touch a person that way with so much ease and love.

    E' bellissima!

    I truly loved this soul sis :*

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  10. As you know I don't do romance well, but this is beautiful, sensual and full of delicate love. <3

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  11. I would like you to touch me like the waves touch the shore, sometimes hesitatingly, and other times crashing on to it, creating a timeless fusion.
    Absolutely loved the poem," I would like you to touch me as if you were going away tomorrow, far, far away, and you wanted to remember the feel of my body, the texture of my skin, the very essence of who I am." Specially these lines <3

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  12. This poem is like the lover's touch, which can only be felt by heart and can't be explained! Dear Alpana,you've left me in a trance.
    -'ELLE'

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  13. Now this was so very wild and delicious. A lover like this exists in only fantasy but in real time evryone is either tired or eager to complete ;)

    Joy always,
    Susan

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  14. This is breathtaking stuff, Alpana...You do romance so exquisitely!! ♥

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  15. What passion in intensity! Very nice indeed ...

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  16. The courage to ask what you truly desire...is real courage!

    Revealing!!!

    http://fernandoymas.blogspot.com/

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  17. Alpana you are a true romantic.So much of sensitivity-isn't it hurtful sometimes ?

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  18. Passion and sensuality oozing out of every line. So beautiful.
    WOW! I am at loss of words. :)

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  19. Very strong words!!!

    It makes me remember the following From Canterbury Tales:
    "Flesh is so newf angel, with mischaunce,
    That we can in no thing have pleasaunce
    That tendeth unto virtue any while"

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  20. touch you i will,
    and leave an imprint,
    so when the days go by,
    and things change,
    you look back,
    breathe in deep,
    and with this same intensity tommorow,
    you say my name.

    my compliments on a intense, passionate and a very beautiful poem.

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  21. Am lost in these words, awesome! :) xx

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  22. Those were beatiful words moulded into a poetry. I liked the way you've kept up with each line and the flow of it. Only the person who is in love with a man can write such beautiful lines.

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  23. just one word-incredible!Glad I discovered this blog.following.
    hats off to a fantastic writer.So much,so deep on so little a topic...seems like you have redefined for me what 'touch' holds..
    thanks for sharing,lookig forward to read more from you.

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  24. Wow! How beautiful! :) Great job on! I just loved every word of this. Also, the photo is amazing! :)

    Lovely, lovely post,
    Kendra

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  25. The master of romance writing!

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  26. Brilliant work. Full of passion and insight. Loved it. :)

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  27. Passionately sensuous, yet so pure and lovely..

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  28. Stunned to silence as i felt that you had written what was going on in my mind! Keep up the good work.

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  29. i feel as if i am listening to a song, a tune binding two lovers with a delicate TOUCH.

    SUPERB!!!

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  30. The poet is on song! One of the most touching and sensuous poems I have ever read

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  31. Wow!! Could there be more beautiful ways to touch! very nice lady...

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  32. wow !!!

    very touching poem ..

    regards
    rahul

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  33. *speechless*
    this.honestly.blew.off.my.mind.
    this is beyond AWESOME!!!!!
    i just LOVE the way you write, it brings tingle down my spine...

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  34. I would like you to touch me as if your hands were paintbrushes, and as you caress me, you are coloring me in your own sparkling, dazzling hues.




    superb lines

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  35. nice poem
    really like it
    mere blog par bhi aaiyega
    umeed kara hun aapko pasand aayega
    http://iamhereonlyforu.blogspot.com/

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  36. Lovely, Last sentence makes me speechless~~

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  37. Dear Alpana,

    To write like this one really needs a lot of conviction and more importantly you cannot get such depth in your writing unless you are true to yourself. The subject taken by you "touch" can be perceived in many ways .... It could just animal instinct within us. But the touch you have given this beautiful write up "touch" can crystalise only from the truth within you. Great! Keep it up!!

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  38. your poems has deep essence of love and spiritually.

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  39. AS of today we breathe our last.

    Good poem and good comments too!

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  40. such profound poetry.... love it....

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  41. amazing beautiful... its so passionate... loved each and everyone of them :)

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  42. this is beautiful..

    Love is marvellos and lucky are the people who have it ..



    Bikram's

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  43. speechless......wonderful lines.

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  44. Amazing. Deep, painful, mesmerizing, soulful..can be this touch.

    Loved reading it.

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  45. Wonderful write up... if only everyone can experience this touch at least one.

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  46. Wow!! I almost speechless. It's simply beautiful.

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  47. I am not much of a poetry lover but this one just had me hooked! Very passionate- I am reminded of the song "Sometimes when we touch.. the honesty is too much". A touch is sometimes all that it takes!

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  48. OMG! this is such a gorgeous post! I totally love it! :) It's like a complete love song with an actual love story! Wow.You rock! I'm just going to follow you,right away! :)

    Loved these lines most.
    "I would like you to touch me as if your hand were a feather, lightly caressing the edge of my being.

    I would like you to touch me as if your hands were paintbrushes, and as you caress me, you are coloring me in your own sparkling, dazzling hues."

    They are simply simply beautiful.I really fell in love with that! :)

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  49. Erotic and romantic all at the same time. I loved the images that my mind conjured while reading this poem!

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  50. Romantic and awesome.....keep it up....

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  51. I loved the beauty of words..very beautifully narrated.
    It made me to dive in to the world of imagination.

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  52. amazingly portrayed.... :)!!!
    its the 1formation of words showcasing the beauty of touch :)!!

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  53. Amazingly portrayed....!!!
    plunge of depths...sometimes its just the touch devoid of words which makes it all.. :)!!!
    Keep Blogging!! :)

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  54. i am actually spellbound reading this!! wow!! u write so damn amazingly yar!! loved it :) awsm work :)

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  55. beautiful....i wish i had some other words that cud tell u how amazing i felt after i read dat....!
    thank u... :)

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  56. Never thought Touch could be expressed in so many ways though its a craving everyone has an urge for! Hats off!!

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  57. sensitive yet romantic one. Beautiful!

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