Monday, December 26, 2011

THE KISS


THE KISS




His eyes were of darkness
Reflections from his soul
His heart had been shattered
Left broken and cold

He was a warrior
Fighting for what was wrong
He came to me one night
When he heard my soulful cry

Under the moon we met
Fell into an icy embrace
It sent shivers up my spine
Just to stare upon his face

He held me in his arms
Fighting against my will
Using his power to control me
All I could do was stand still

He kissed my lips
Sending fear through me
Making my mind race
As he watched my body

I looked into his eyes
Fire was what I saw
He saw right through
My helpless disguise

We stared at each other
Moving closer than before
He saw in my eyes
I was not afraid anymore

Once again he kissed me
This time I kissed him back
Two dark souls together
Both evil and black


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Labels: Kiss, evil, eyes
Picture: Courtesy Google Images

48 comments:

  1. Wow....!! Great Feeling shared via poem.....But I am confused I feel same like you while kissing "Riddhi" on lips at honeymoon.....!

    I had a question that Is every person feel same while kissing to his/her loved soul????

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  2. Very intense lines. You have been able to create a genuine poem out of a much written about topic.

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  3. @Harshal: I am happy that you are enjoying your newly wedded life...Yes,it feels great to be kissed by the one you love.

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  4. nice lines on kiss ( the most sensible emotion )

    I too have something about kiss

    see coffeekiss

    http://www.readitt.in/2011/12/coffee-kiss-sculpture-hongkong.html

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  5. What a soulful kiss! Only you could kiss and tell :)

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  6. This is fantastic alpana...great portray f emotions by you..intense love n dark poetry!!

    Love
    Mani

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  7. Wonderful, I loved this, great words on a kiss.

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  8. @Readitt: Thank u,and I read your post,its wonderful.

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  9. @Rahul: You made my day..thanks.

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  10. @Jan: Thank u,your words mean a lot to me.

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  11. Two dark souls or two enlightened souls? :) Lovely lovely lovely poem, Alpana.

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  12. //"Two dark souls together
    Both evil and black"//


    Fantastic !!!

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  13. Very well expressed!
    Just One Word "Awesome" \m/

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  14. I can relate to this now! Only the last night I had my first 'mistletoe kiss'! a poem about it is forming in my mind this very moment! But, oh, but why that 'dark' in the end? I couldn't comprehend it.
    -Autumn Eliza(ELLE)

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  15. such a beautiful poem... loved it....

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  16. @Elle:Thanks,I wanted it to have a different end...its basically my thoughts on a situation or a relationship that i wanted to refuse,but couldn't.

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  17. Why evil and black???
    Don't understand..

    :)
    Loved the poem until the last line..

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  18. Passionate and intense... Yes kiss feels that way :) Beautifully put :)

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  19. Wow, that shocked me. And i like being shocked. Awesome poem is awesome :) love it...

    Take care and keep writing..........

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  20. Unknowingly while writing the poem you seemed to have kissed Alfred Noyes 's "The highwayman".

    But then that feel has been over-said over the years.

    I liked your poem in parts. Liked it when you say:
    He held me in his arms
    Fighting against my will
    Using his power to control me
    All I could do was stand still

    Quite visual & graphic.

    But throughout the remaining poem I kept searching for a plot. A visual.
    You seem overwhelmed with the concept of knight in shining armor. It shows when you say :

    He was a warrior
    Fighting for what was wrong
    He came to me one night
    When he heard my soulful cry

    The moonlit night also makes your sets pretty Victorian. But the moon too remains passive throughout your poem. Expected a greater role.

    am a poet myself. Not a famous one (rather an under-closet one). Thus I don't wait for ice-breaking when talking to another poet. Hope to comeback soon.

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  21. Two dark souls together...just evil and black.

    I loved it.

    I wonder if you know, that your pain, fury, hope and struggle actually come out in each and every one of your writings.

    I'm becoming a fan :)

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  22. wow .............kiss under d moon rooomantic
    very well written :)

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    http://campbuzzz.blogspot.com/2011/12/i-wanna-be-child-again.html

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  23. Awesome poem <3
    Keep writing :)
    Visit my blog :poetrymyfeelings.blogspot.com

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  24. I really love the layout of your blog! Keep writing more :)

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  25. Absolutely fantastic poem. So passionate, full of emotions...

    You are in a completely different league Alpana, I'm a huge admirer of your writing now :)

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  26. Oooo two dark souls...hmmm...I'd take it lightly LOL...sounds like me and... :P

    Loved how kisses could be delectable and hold one in a trance ;)

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    Love
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  28. Second paragraph onwards you just flow with it...Beautiful...

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  29. Second paragraph onwards you just flow with it...Beautiful!

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  30. Nice writeup :)
    very warm and beautiful emotions and magically woven to words

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  31. Nice writeup :)
    very warm and beautiful emotions and magically woven to words

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  32. woaah...that was beautiful...

    regards
    rahul

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  33. Loved the poem, lost myself in it, I can feel the warrior, I wanna kiss him too :)

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  34. Hello.
    WoW! This is intense. The souls might be evil, but when possessed by love, the light will shine through.
    Simply beautiful, Alpana.
    Nice imagery too.
    Thanks for sharing.

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  35. Wow! That was dark and intense. The guy reminded me of Heathcliff in Wuthering Heights. Dark, handsome and something menacing about him. I guess one will become putty to be kissed like that. Beautifully passionate poem Alpana

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