Sunday, March 27, 2011



The haze of dusk just settling
The world becomes quiet
The tides are sluggishly slow now
The birds nestling down
Warm breezes fill the senses
Scented candles illuminate the room
As I swirl my glass of wine
No thoughts, no worries
Just waiting for the time
For my lover, with a caress, loving gentleness
Sweet breath against my neck, makes his presence felt
Leaving nothing but a sensation
Making me wanton, as my emotions start to whimper 
Passions revealed
Desires sedated
That I never once believed
That such pleasure awaited me
Lips finally meet
So tender and hoping
As we intertwine
Searching, aching, yearning
Eager to please, a caress, loving gentleness
Feeling each deliberate movement
Captivating glances
Passions stirring, awakening desires
Sensations tantalized
Seductiveness of two
Feeling passion’s burning touch
And your heartbeat next to mine
As I quiver at his touch
My body so fragile, so vulnerable
His determination is unmoving
A desire to bring ecstasy
To a woman that he loves
Passionate and sensual love
Everything in this world
Every voice in the night
Every little thing of beauty comes shining through
In your eyes and all that is you become a part of me
Feelings rush over me, knowing that the man I love is in my arms  
Life and love intertwined
Desire takes control and I must fill myself with him
My body arching to meet his
Every move he makes fills me
Bringing me to new heights of unspeakable pleasures
As I gasp in ecstasy
Our souls reaching to be as one
Now and forever…
Our magical dance entwines us
Our love gives the other new life
Now he holds me close to him
Feeling My Mind, My Body, and My soul

Alpana Jaiswal
Label: Lover,caress,soul,love,passion
Picture:Courtesy Google Images
This post was first published at We Have A Story


I am a fan of your articles and I wait for them.It's so beautiful I can't expresss.Your heart is full of Love and it inspires me.God bless you.Keep writing dear.
March 12, 2011 10:09 PM
Thank you Suraj,and yes,I can't do without love.
March 12, 2011 10:11 PM
What a sensuous poem Alpana! Beautiful!
March 12, 2011 10:17 PM
Alpana,Lovely, sweet longings and love filled poem.
March 12, 2011 10:21 PM
Yes sensuous is the write word and it's beautiful....full of feelings...full of love...loved it Alpana :D
March 12, 2011 10:28 PM
@Rimly...Thank you..getting all my classes from you..but will never reach where you are.
@Sulekha...Thanks Sulekha,you know my romantic heart.
March 12, 2011 10:28 PM
You are too humble Alpana. You have a style which is yours only and it is beautiful
March 12, 2011 10:35 PM
@Thank you,Abhi,I guess you will understand,as I know you are a romantic person..
March 12, 2011 10:36 PM
I am so romantic you can't even imagine Alpana :P
March 12, 2011 10:39 PM you,sweetheart..and you know your place in my life'
@Abhi...I can't imagine??? Then let me,Abhi....
March 12, 2011 10:43 PM
Romance passionately is like biting into that deep heavenly bitter sweet chocolate.
March 12, 2011 11:01 PM want it,and yet want to resist.
March 12, 2011 11:03 PM
It's such a beautiful is in the air...:)
March 12, 2011 11:31 PM
Mom..when will you write something for me?
March 12, 2011 11:32 PM
God...I can feel something in the you want to tell me..Alpu Mausi????
March 12, 2011 11:35 PM
March 12, 2011 11:39 PM
@Isabelle...thank you..and is in"my" air...
@Aishani...give me a suggestion..
@Kushagra...well,in due course of time..
@Hansika..I was scared of what would think of this..Love u you are relating to me,like my sister would have..
March 13, 2011 12:04 AM
"Passions stirring, awakening desires
Sensations tantalized
Seductiveness of two
Feeling passion’s burning touch
And your heartbeat next to mine"
I loved these lines the most <3 Lovely.. so full of love!!! greatt greattt super greatt...
March 13, 2011 12:21 AM
@Sumit..Thank u..thought several times before posting it..I am glad you liked it.
March 13, 2011 12:35 AM
An Admirer
My attitude is always one of sensuality, aggressive enthusiasm and a kind of outrageousness in my expression.
you fill my senses...
March 13, 2011 1:01 AM
oh alpana... God knows how i long to be satiated :P... to hear his heartbeat next to mine... 

i could feel every word that you wrote in your poem...geez... wow!
March 13, 2011 3:38 AM
Sancheeta Biswas
ur writings r a reality bite in the veins. its a spark, its a jerk. love u for the wonderful thoughts u expose........... so fantastic.
March 13, 2011 4:40 AM
@An Admirer...thank u..and don't you think its high time You said as to who you are.
@Melissa...Thank u..I know that you genuinely like what I you always..
March 13, 2011 4:47 AM
@An Admirer...thank u..and don't you think its high time You said as to who you are.
@Melissa...Thank u..I know that you genuinely like what I you always..
March 13, 2011 4:47 AM
Alpu as always beautifully always ur writing always amazes me.....oh could so feel and experience sensual:)
March 13, 2011 10:33 AM
Alpu, once again you've excelled. Your poem is just beautiful.
March 13, 2011 11:26 AM
I am infatuated with this piece..
All I can say is you are a true lover :)

Love you :)
Take care ..
March 13, 2011 11:36 AM
Beautiful,romantic,sensual...what more..its visible here because its there in you.
March 13, 2011 2:54 PM
@Simsim..One more time Simsim..and I will kill u...I am getting back to my old self,Seema..for whom love,passion were very important in life..and thank you for eveything..for always being by my side..inspite of the fact that we have not met for 17 years now.
@Pramilladi..Thank u..your words are always important to me.
March 13, 2011 4:37 PM
@Simran..Thank u your age,I was at anything to do with romance.
@Rahul..Yes,its true self.
March 13, 2011 4:38 PM
I love reading passionate writing and your words fit the bill. Thanks for this lushness as we need to often reflect on the softer side of life which has become so harsh these days. Beautiful. Thank you!
March 13, 2011 4:45 PM
Frane Bhattacharya
..very passionate...loved it..
March 13, 2011 7:42 PM
reshma dugar
hi your poetry is beautiful every womans desire. i loved it felt like romancing.keep writing.
March 13, 2011 9:31 PM
@Tameka...thank u...I write only with things I can personally connect to..
@Frane..Thank u.
@Reshma...Thanks a lot,was extremely nervous doing this..
March 14, 2011 8:57 AM
Aaaah Alpu, one could make a song out of those words...very sensual, very passionate. Good going...
March 14, 2011 11:06 AM
thanks a lot,Swati...a friend actually called it "A" rated...was not sure of this..
March 14, 2011 3:35 PM
you cool woman're fantastic...hugs Alpu!
March 14, 2011 3:36 PM
Beautifully written. Haven't read such a romantic poem in a long time. Thank you for writing this poem. Keep penning!
March 14, 2011 3:52 PM
to good alpana....luv u
March 14, 2011 7:48 PM
@N J...Thank you..for coming here,and reading my post,and appreciating it..will want you to do this every time.
@Dipti..Thanks..and,I will always love you.
March 14, 2011 9:01 PM
Extremely beautiful Alpana - splendid really : )
March 15, 2011 10:28 AM
Thank you Kriti.
March 15, 2011 3:20 PM
Nandini Mulay
alpana i never knew you were so romantic,anyway lovely one.
March 15, 2011 10:20 PM
Wow !! 

so lovely and romantic ..
March 16, 2011 11:32 AM
@Vineet...Thanks for visiting here..and what "WOW" more specific.
March 16, 2011 10:37 PM
The best creation of yours till date. They weren't words they were feelings!
March 21, 2011 9:23 AM
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March 21, 2011 9:23 AM
@Souvick...thank you...and I am happy that you liked it...
March 22, 2011 3:51 AM


  1. You have painted a very wonderful picture - for dusk to midnight and beyond!!

  2. You describe every subtle moment with such passion and emotion. Wow! You are a truly blessed writer and a wonderful loving soul. :)

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  4. Dear Alpana,

    I am generally not in the habit of reading some thing so romantic as this! but i am amazed by the number of adjectives that come to your mind when you write about love in such a beautiful and sensual way. I think you can give Harold Robins a run for his money. Keep it up and keep writing.

    By Jags

    This writeup is the closest I can get to writing romantic :))

  5. Woaaah! what can I say... I could feel the temperature rising :)

  6. hii there,

    i read it .. i re-read it n now i am reading it again..

    i just want to say my reaction everytime i read it is WOOOOOOW


  7. Such a lovely poem!! ^_^
    I praise ur talent :)


  8. wow, you really pour out your heart in your posts. Very nice poem!

  9. Aah. Your lines make it hard for me to rest in peace on this extremely chilly saturday morning, thanks to 'Thane' effect. But I know only the fortunate few get to really experience what you've written.

    Stirred up my emotions. Keep it up.


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