MOTIFS ON THE WALL: SATIATED

THIS IS FOR YOU, MY LOVE..

The haze of dusk just settling

The world becomes quiet

The tides are sluggishly slow now

The birds nestling down

Warm breezes fill the senses

Scented candles illuminate the room

As I swirl my glass of wine

No thoughts, no worries

Just waiting for the time

For my lover, with a caress, loving gentleness
Sweet breath against my neck, makes his presence felt

Leaving nothing but a sensation

Making me wanton, as my emotions start to whimper

Passions revealed
Desires sedated

That I never once believed

That such pleasure awaited me

Lips finally meet
So tender and hoping
As we intertwine
Searching, aching, yearning
Eager to please, a caress, loving gentleness

Feeling each deliberate movement

Captivating glances

Passions stirring, awakening desires

Sensations tantalized

Seductiveness of two

Feeling passion’s burning touch
And your heartbeat next to mine

As I quiver at his touch

My body so fragile, so vulnerable

His determination is unmoving

A desire to bring ecstasy

To a woman that he loves

Passionate and sensual love

Everything in this world

Every voice in the night

Every little thing of beauty comes shining through

In your eyes and all that is you become a part of me

Feelings rush over me, knowing that the man I love is in my arms
Life and love intertwined

Desire takes control and I must fill myself with him

My body arching to meet his
Every move he makes fills me

Bringing me to new heights of unspeakable pleasures

As I gasp in ecstasy

Our souls reaching to be as one

Now and forever…

Our magical dance entwines us

Our love gives the other new life

Now he holds me close to him

Feeling My Mind, My Body, and My soul

Alpana Jaiswal

Copyright@Motifs2011

Label: Lover,caress,soul,love,passion

Picture:Courtesy Google Images

This post was first published at We Have A Story

48 comments

Suraj
I am a fan of your articles and I wait for them.It's so beautiful I can't expresss.Your heart is full of Love and it inspires me.God bless you.Keep writing dear.
March 12, 2011 10:09 PM
Alpana Jaiswal
Thank you Suraj,and yes,I can't do without love.
March 12, 2011 10:11 PM
rimly
What a sensuous poem Alpana! Beautiful!
March 12, 2011 10:17 PM
sulekkha
Alpana,Lovely, sweet longings and love filled poem.
March 12, 2011 10:21 PM
Abhisek Panda
Yes sensuous is the write word and it's beautiful....full of feelings...full of love...loved it Alpana :D
March 12, 2011 10:28 PM
Alpana Jaiswal
@Rimly...Thank you..getting all my classes from you..but will never reach where you are.
@Sulekha...Thanks Sulekha,you know my romantic heart.
March 12, 2011 10:28 PM
rimly
You are too humble Alpana. You have a style which is yours only and it is beautiful
March 12, 2011 10:35 PM
Alpana Jaiswal
@Thank you,Abhi,I guess you will understand,as I know you are a romantic person..
March 12, 2011 10:36 PM
Abhisek Panda
I am so romantic you can't even imagine Alpana :P
March 12, 2011 10:39 PM
Alpana Jaiswal
@Rimly..love you,sweetheart..and you know your place in my life'
@Abhi...I can't imagine??? Then let me,Abhi....
March 12, 2011 10:43 PM
YogaSavy
Romance passionately is like biting into that deep heavenly bitter sweet chocolate.
March 12, 2011 11:01 PM
Alpana Jaiswal
@YogaSavy..true...you want it,and yet want to resist.
March 12, 2011 11:03 PM
Isabelle Man
It's such a beautiful piece...love is in the air...:)
March 12, 2011 11:31 PM
Aishani
Mom..when will you write something for me?
March 12, 2011 11:32 PM
Kushagra
God...I can feel something in the air..do you want to tell me..Alpu Mausi????
March 12, 2011 11:35 PM
Hansika
WOW....SPEECHLESS....
March 12, 2011 11:39 PM
Alpana Jaiswal
@Isabelle...thank you..and yes.love is in"my" air...
@Aishani...give me a suggestion..
@Kushagra...well,in due course of time..
@Hansika..I was scared of what would think of this..Love u baby..now you are relating to me,like my sister would have..
March 13, 2011 12:04 AM
SUMIT KUMAR
"Passions stirring, awakening desires
Sensations tantalized
Seductiveness of two
Feeling passion’s burning touch
And your heartbeat next to mine"
I loved these lines the most <3 Lovely.. so full of love!!! greatt greattt super greatt...
March 13, 2011 12:21 AM
Alpana Jaiswal
@Sumit..Thank u..thought several times before posting it..I am glad you liked it.
March 13, 2011 12:35 AM
An Admirer
My attitude is always one of sensuality, aggressive enthusiasm and a kind of outrageousness in my expression.
you fill my senses...
March 13, 2011 1:01 AM
melissa
oh alpana... God knows how i long to be satiated :P... to hear his heartbeat next to mine...

i could feel every word that you wrote in your poem...geez... wow!
March 13, 2011 3:38 AM
Sancheeta Biswas
ur writings r a reality bite in the veins. its a spark, its a jerk. love u for the wonderful thoughts u expose........... so fantastic.
March 13, 2011 4:40 AM
Alpana Jaiswal
@An Admirer...thank u..and don't you think its high time You said as to who you are.
@Melissa...Thank u..I know that you genuinely like what I write..love you always..
March 13, 2011 4:47 AM
Alpana Jaiswal
@An Admirer...thank u..and don't you think its high time You said as to who you are.
@Melissa...Thank u..I know that you genuinely like what I write..love you always..
March 13, 2011 4:47 AM
simsim
Alpu as always beautifully written...as always ur writing always amazes me.....oh could so feel and experience it.....so sensual:)
March 13, 2011 10:33 AM
pramilla
Alpu, once again you've excelled. Your poem is just beautiful.
March 13, 2011 11:26 AM
Simran
Amorous!
I am infatuated with this piece..
All I can say is you are a true lover :)

Love you :)
Take care ..
March 13, 2011 11:36 AM
Rahul
Beautiful,romantic,sensual...what more..its visible here because its there in you.
March 13, 2011 2:54 PM
Alpana Jaiswal
@Simsim..One more time Simsim..and I will kill u...I am getting back to my old self,Seema..for whom love,passion were very important in life..and thank you for eveything..for always being by my side..inspite of the fact that we have not met for 17 years now.
@Pramilladi..Thank u..your words are always important to me.
March 13, 2011 4:37 PM
Alpana Jaiswal
@Simran..Thank u Sweetie..infatuation..at your age,I was at anything to do with romance.
@Rahul..Yes,its me..my true self.
March 13, 2011 4:38 PM
Tameka
I love reading passionate writing and your words fit the bill. Thanks for this lushness as we need to often reflect on the softer side of life which has become so harsh these days. Beautiful. Thank you!
March 13, 2011 4:45 PM
Frane Bhattacharya
..very passionate...loved it..
March 13, 2011 7:42 PM
reshma dugar
hi your poetry is beautiful every womans desire. i loved it felt like romancing.keep writing.
March 13, 2011 9:31 PM
Alpana Jaiswal
@Tameka...thank u...I write only with things I can personally connect to..
@Frane..Thank u.
@Reshma...Thanks a lot,was extremely nervous doing this..
March 14, 2011 8:57 AM
Swati
Aaaah Alpu, one could make a song out of those words...very sensual, very passionate. Good going...
March 14, 2011 11:06 AM
Alpana Jaiswal
thanks a lot,Swati...a friend actually called it "A" rated...was not sure of this..
March 14, 2011 3:35 PM
Swati
you cool woman you.....you're fantastic...hugs Alpu!
March 14, 2011 3:36 PM
N J
Beautifully written. Haven't read such a romantic poem in a long time. Thank you for writing this poem. Keep penning!
March 14, 2011 3:52 PM
dipti
to good alpana....luv u
March 14, 2011 7:48 PM
Alpana Jaiswal
@N J...Thank you..for coming here,and reading my post,and appreciating it..will want you to do this every time.
@Dipti..Thanks..and,I will always love you.
March 14, 2011 9:01 PM
Kriti
Extremely beautiful Alpana - splendid really : )
March 15, 2011 10:28 AM
Alpana Jaiswal
Thank you Kriti.
March 15, 2011 3:20 PM
Nandini Mulay
alpana i never knew you were so romantic,anyway lovely one.
March 15, 2011 10:20 PM
Vineet
Wow !!

so lovely and romantic ..
March 16, 2011 11:32 AM
Alpana Jaiswal
@Vineet...Thanks for visiting here..and what "WOW"...be more specific.
March 16, 2011 10:37 PM
Souvick Mazumder
The best creation of yours till date. They weren't words they were feelings!
March 21, 2011 9:23 AM
Souvick Mazumder
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March 21, 2011 9:23 AM
Alpana Jaiswal
@Souvick...thank you...and I am happy that you liked it...
March 22, 2011 3:51 AM

11 comments:

VyankateshMarch 27, 2011 at 4:37 PM
You have painted a very wonderful picture - for dusk to midnight and beyond!!
Akshay Kumar GDecember 28, 2011 at 12:06 AM
You describe every subtle moment with such passion and emotion. Wow! You are a truly blessed writer and a wonderful loving soul. :)
JagdishDecember 28, 2011 at 11:09 PM
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JagdishDecember 28, 2011 at 11:09 PM
Dear Alpana,

I am generally not in the habit of reading some thing so romantic as this! but i am amazed by the number of adjectives that come to your mind when you write about love in such a beautiful and sensual way. I think you can give Harold Robins a run for his money. Keep it up and keep writing.

By Jags
http://jskolur.blogspot.com

http://jskolur.blogspot.com/2011/09/i-bet.html

This writeup is the closest I can get to writing romantic :))
Aparna GautamDecember 29, 2011 at 12:11 PM
Woaaah! what can I say... I could feel the temperature rising :)
raDecember 29, 2011 at 2:03 PM
hii there,

i read it .. i re-read it n now i am reading it again..

i just want to say my reaction everytime i read it is WOOOOOOW

regards
rahul
Anu LalDecember 29, 2011 at 10:56 PM
Beautifully expressed!
DhakkanzDecember 30, 2011 at 12:23 AM
Lovely poem..loved it.
DefiantDecember 30, 2011 at 8:34 PM
Such a lovely poem!! ^_^
I praise ur talent :)

Cheers,
Madhumathi.
Dark KnightDecember 30, 2011 at 11:50 PM
wow, you really pour out your heart in your posts. Very nice poem!
RajDecember 31, 2011 at 11:10 AM
Aah. Your lines make it hard for me to rest in peace on this extremely chilly saturday morning, thanks to 'Thane' effect. But I know only the fortunate few get to really experience what you've written.

Stirred up my emotions. Keep it up.