Saturday, December 3, 2011

I SEE MYSELF IN YOU


I SEE MYSELF IN YOU



We met as though by chance
We looked into each other's eyes
Without deception or disguise
A silent message passed between us
Your hungry heart was plainly seen
You saw desire I could not hide
You looked at me and saw inside
How could a glance have said so much
And cause a chill without a touch
What was that chemistry between us
That promised what we felt was right
What satisfaction we'd have missed
If we had not reached out and kissed
I do not know if it was you
Or was it I who reached out

But on that night our souls were bare
We moved in perfect harmony
Bodies warm with passion's heat
Pressed together in a hungry embrace
Intertwined we moved as one
Synchronizing to the inner beat
The erotic rhythm of our hearts
Beating in time with the melody
That stole its way from the depths
A harmony of sounds unintelligible
Voiced only by passionate lovers



I couldn't tell the you from me
I must have known you from before
How else could you have reached my core
In life perhaps before this one
What had we shared? What had we done?
I must have loved you in the past


We walk a secret path today
In the moment of our quiet intimacy
Not knowing where this trail will lead
Nor grasping when it ends
We share our private thoughts today
Trusting they'll do no harm
Inner feelings, deep desires
We walk today this special route
And each reach out for the other
Hands and hearts together now
But I knew for sure that I had found love
When I looked into your eyes
And found myself……

Copyright@Motifs2011
Labels: Love, passion, hearts
Picture: Courtesy Google Images





51 comments:

  1. Voaa!! This is v touching n passionate....

    Lost in love lost in you
    When u became me n I became U!!

    Lovely!!

    Love
    Mani

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  2. A passionate, sensuous, melody of love penned beautifully! Truly admirable!

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  3. Breathtakingly Beautiful!...'I couldn't tell you from me...' Oh, what a line!It sums up all!
    -Portia

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  4. @Manisha: Thank you...Love at its best!!

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  5. @Rahul: Thank you..I am touched by your words.

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  6. lovely and romantic!

    "And each reach out for the other
    Hands and hearts together now"...

    I read this and believe in forever!

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  7. Loved it! Love the ease with which these words were made to carry the depth of their meaning without destroying the tenderness of their emotions..

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  8. Beautiful! I love it all..the last lines really stand out: I knew for sure that I had found love
    When I looked into your eyes
    And found myself

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  9. Man I miss my girl friend now. I guess the poem had the intended effect which means you did a great job.

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  10. Wonderful and touching! :)
    Your words hold me to your thoughts..
    That's the real art!

    Lot's of love :)

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  11. @Apoyando: Thank you for visiting my blog...I try my best.

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  12. @Jessica M...Thank u..your words mean a lot to me.

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  13. @ Abhishek Ranjith: I am glad I could do that you..thank u for visiting my blog.

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  14. Passionate, sensual, and absolutely beautiful! Your words mesmerized me . . .
    Blessings!

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  15. a mirror...I in you..you in me....Loving you...As always...XOXOXOXO

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  16. reminds me of my 'mirror, mirror' post ;-)

    my favorite lines: 'We walk a secret path today, In the moment of our quiet intimacy, Not knowing where this trail will lead, Nor grasping when it ends...'

    reminds me to appreciate this moment with my love because i don't know if there will be another.

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  17. @Martha: I am honored by your words,thank u.

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  18. @Bonnie: You know what I mean..thank u.

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  19. @Linda:I feel the same..thank u for coming here.

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  20. This reminds me of the line " I am you and you are me". You speak the language of one soul mate talking of another. Beautiful Alpana

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  21. @Rimly: Thank you...I wrote what I was feeling...

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  22. Beautiful story of love, reminds me of Randy and I. Never knowing when it will end keeps me loving and appreciative everyday. This is so beautifully written. Thank you.

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  23. Hello.
    This is the kind of poem to read on a late evening with the one you hold dear. It's sensuous, full of passion & can warm any soul reading it.
    You expressed this very well Alpana & your image is spot on perfect.
    Thanks for sharing & visiting. Your comments are appreciated.

    My latest:
    More Fulfilling With Love

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  24. Amaaazingg poem!! Loved the way you expressed the feelings..:)

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  25. @Andy: I am happy you liked it,and you will understand,being such a romantic soul .

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  26. @Madhumati: Thank you for visiting my blog,and your comment.

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  27. Another passionate poem from your heart. Loved the way it was written. Great choice of words!

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  28. I've actually forgotten how it felt like. Or if I ever saw myself in somebody. But the poem spoke to my heart just like those days when I read it to somebody special.

    Oh love moves in mysterious ways ;)

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  29. it was a musical fusion of two souls in words........wonderfully crafted passion of two loving mates.

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  30. @NJ: Thank you...you are my best inspiration..

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  31. @ Madhusha :Thank u for visiting my blog..

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  32. @Melissa:Love will find a way to your heart..And I truly believe that.

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  33. Beautifully written, you wear the words of love well. I am always taken back to once upon a time when I read your poems.

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  34. Very beautiful poem... Intense and passionate.

    Love
    http://www.meghasarin.blogspot.com

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  35. "In me shall sleep the rivers' hungry lust and the ocean's tireless waiting" Kamala Das

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  36. Adorably written.Luv it.Glad to follow U.

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  37. Beautiful and passionate - only you can write such a delicious poem!

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  38. Its beautiful.. i could relate to it...


    Shashi
    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/12/whispers-buddha-song.html
    At Twitter @VerseEveryDay

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  39. Alpana,

    So very passionate....

    xoxoxxo

    Jessica

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  40. This is lovely depiction of love/crush at first glance !enjoyed reading...lovely imagery created by your words.

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