Sunday, November 20, 2011

FOREVER YOURS


FOREVER  YOURS




Silently I wake up and look at the man next to me
I see him sleeping peacefully and my arms long to hold him near
I reach out to gently touch his face
And I touch him
His soft, silky skin
Caressing him
Remembering short hours ago, we had shared love's embrace
He stirs just then and sees me looking at him
Our eyes never leave each other as he reaches out to me
I smile at him as I move closer
He smiles too and looks deep into my eyes

He draws me close, and whispers in my ear
Soft words that I want to hear
He takes me in his arms placing a kiss upon my cheeks
I turn my head slowly, his lips meeting mine
A subtle moan escapes me as his hand explores anew
Passionate kisses intensifies as our rhythmic dance begins
He proclaims his love for me as he kisses my neck

I move my hands over him finally to rest upon his chest
His soft, sensuous lips touching mine
And I give myself to him
And as our hearts, minds, bodies, and souls entwine
I arch my back, catch his eyes adoring in their allure
He knows my every need, fantasy, desire
And he fulfills and satisfies each one of these
As I had only dreamed of
He knows of a million ways to make my body quake
Of smoldering hungers down deep inside
A desire for something that we share
As we reach the perfect harmony
Together once more

Now as we lie entwined
The sun begins to rise
It is not just a new day
But a new beginning
As we plan to spend the rest of our lives together
Embraced in each other's arms and hearts
Forever

 I wrote this after reading some beautiful poetry by Manisha Bhatia....Thank you...You can read them at...https://www.facebook.com/InnocentAttemptsofCreativity

 Copyright@Motifs2011
Labels:Forever,heart,kiss
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Posted by Motifs at 11:18 AM
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47 comments:

  1. photos by janNovember 20, 2011 at 11:22 AM

    absolutely beautiful, so much my husband and I. It is a beautiful love.

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  2. JANUNovember 20, 2011 at 11:41 AM

    Passionate and beautiful.

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  3. SimranNovember 20, 2011 at 11:42 AM

    Beautiful!!

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  4. Alpana JaiswalNovember 20, 2011 at 11:48 AM

    @Jan: Thank you..I wish you and your husband all the happiness in this world.

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  5. Alpana JaiswalNovember 20, 2011 at 11:48 AM

    @Janu: Thanks a lot.

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  6. Alpana JaiswalNovember 20, 2011 at 11:49 AM

    @Simran: Thank you sweetheart.

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  7. aakashNovember 20, 2011 at 12:01 PM

    :)
    That's some romantic morning I would say.

    aJ

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  8. Alpana JaiswalNovember 20, 2011 at 12:03 PM

    @Aakash: What better way to start a Sunday...thanks.

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  9. Monu AwallaNovember 20, 2011 at 12:41 PM

    beautiful moments.. loved it, loved the fun, romance, intimacy and promises.. :)

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  10. Alpana JaiswalNovember 20, 2011 at 12:55 PM

    @Monu: Thank you...I just followed Manisha's foot steps.

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  11. Melissa TandocNovember 20, 2011 at 1:03 PM

    Now how do I cope with this soul sis? Just kidding, but it does bring 'fire' within and a deep sense of longing to belong to somebody *even if he's just imaginary or an illusion ;)

    Of this poetry, I loved that part when 'his soft, sensuous lips touched mine and I give myself to him' ~ well...;)

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  12. Alpana JaiswalNovember 20, 2011 at 1:08 PM

    @Melissa: We are all coping with it,at times you don't get what you want,but there is the right time for everything,yours is sill to come,and when it happens,it will be the most beautiful moment of your life..love u always.

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  13. sulekkhaNovember 20, 2011 at 1:47 PM

    Alapana, Your poems are awesome, absolutely lovely and romantic.Great work.

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  14. N JNovember 20, 2011 at 1:59 PM

    Lovely, romantic piece of poetry!

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  15. RimlyNovember 20, 2011 at 4:33 PM

    Reading your poem brings within a me a sense of longing to find love like that Alpana. Just too good. It is beautiful.

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  16. UnknownNovember 20, 2011 at 5:00 PM

    I'd like to wake up to that

    A

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  17. UnknownNovember 20, 2011 at 5:08 PM

    well, what can I say to this or to Mani's 'November' pink hues? I simply grow red in face and start day-dreaming!Very sensuous!
    -PORTIA

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  18. Alpana JaiswalNovember 20, 2011 at 5:39 PM

    @Sulekha: Thank u..the romantic fool in me never gives up.

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  19. Alpana JaiswalNovember 20, 2011 at 5:39 PM

    @NJ:Thank u..your words mean a lot to me.

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  20. Alpana JaiswalNovember 20, 2011 at 5:40 PM

    @Rimly:You will find it someday..because you also deserve nothing but the best.

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  21. Alpana JaiswalNovember 20, 2011 at 5:42 PM

    @Alejandro: Who doesn't want to wake up to this..thanks for visiting.

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  22. Alpana JaiswalNovember 20, 2011 at 5:43 PM

    @Portia: Thank you..I tried to match up to Manisha's romantic words.

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  23. Manisha BhatiaNovember 20, 2011 at 6:10 PM

    O mine!! Vow!! The sensuality metioned with each and every detail....n tht too esthetically...great alpana!!

    N thanks soo much ...so kind f u!!
    This shows u cherish true creations and budding talents. Its really v humble f u to mention me there.

    Its a wonderful gesture f love n respect for both the creations as well as the writer.

    God Bless U!!
    Love
    Mani

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  24. Alpana JaiswalNovember 20, 2011 at 6:45 PM

    @Manisha: Thank u...Love does it all...Sometimes love is just a lot of heartache, but when u find a person who loves u for u then u are in true love and it will last forever....and there can be nothing more pure than that..

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  25. Manisha BhatiaNovember 20, 2011 at 6:50 PM

    Indeed alpana...even God has kept love at first place...n people who have love brewing in their hearts r d one wid lonliness n gloominess!!

    God Bless!

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  26. NelietaNovember 20, 2011 at 7:35 PM

    A passionate and beautiful poem, Alpana!

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  27. BongoNovember 20, 2011 at 7:54 PM

    fullof passion and beauty......As always...XOXOXOXO

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  28. Alpana JaiswalNovember 21, 2011 at 10:20 AM

    @Nelieta: Thank u.

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  29. Alpana JaiswalNovember 21, 2011 at 10:20 AM

    @Bonnie: thank u...love u always.

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  30. joshi danielNovember 21, 2011 at 11:57 AM

    i could feel them. your best!

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  31. Swati BhattacharyaNovember 21, 2011 at 12:05 PM

    This was beautiful...such sensuous words and feelings! Loved it!

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  32. Alpana JaiswalNovember 21, 2011 at 12:32 PM

    @JD: Thank u..

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  33. Alpana JaiswalNovember 21, 2011 at 12:33 PM

    @Swati: thank u so much,I am glad you liked it.

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  34. Rahul BhatiaNovember 21, 2011 at 12:39 PM

    A soulful and passionate rendition!

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  35. geetsNovember 21, 2011 at 4:13 PM

    liked it :) lovely!

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  36. Alpana JaiswalNovember 21, 2011 at 5:46 PM

    @Rahul: Thank you for visiting my blog..I write only about things that touch me and to which I am closely associated with.

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  37. Alpana JaiswalNovember 21, 2011 at 5:48 PM

    @Geets:Thank you.

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  38. Papercut DollNovember 22, 2011 at 4:05 AM

    From the inspired mind comes even more inspiration and beauty resonates beauty xoxox

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  39. DebraNovember 22, 2011 at 5:39 AM

    Passionnés! Magnifique!

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  40. AnonymousNovember 22, 2011 at 8:26 AM

    I 'll have what you had Alpana!

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  41. KritiNovember 22, 2011 at 3:31 PM

    I'll have to laugh at sparklemezen's comment first ; ))). But your poem is fascinatingly passionate! Very well written indeed.

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  42. Alpana JaiswalNovember 23, 2011 at 10:07 AM

    @Savira...You are most welcome.

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  43. MikeBNovember 24, 2011 at 12:38 AM

    Hello. This is MikeB. I saw your eloquent comments on gratitude (turning chaos into order, etc.) on Sparkle Me Zen and had to see who you are. Your poem is a wonderful, heartfelt, and romantic expression of emotional and physical love. I got goosebumps reading it. What a wonderfully intimate poem and awakening.

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  44. aayanmanNovember 24, 2011 at 8:43 AM

    you see when one begins to write pasionate poetry one has to let go, since so much of it is in the mind,it is sometimes hard to pen it down.

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  45. SogyelNovember 29, 2011 at 6:47 PM

    Beautiful...:)

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  46. Rajendra RaikwarDecember 1, 2011 at 11:29 AM

    Nice One

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  47. Mr.MiglaniJanuary 30, 2012 at 2:33 PM

    This is a very passionate and picturistis post , I really liked it ,.

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