Saturday, December 3, 2011

I SEE MYSELF IN YOU


I SEE MYSELF IN YOU



We met as though by chance
We looked into each other's eyes
Without deception or disguise
A silent message passed between us
Your hungry heart was plainly seen
You saw desire I could not hide
You looked at me and saw inside
How could a glance have said so much
And cause a chill without a touch
What was that chemistry between us
That promised what we felt was right
What satisfaction we'd have missed
If we had not reached out and kissed
I do not know if it was you
Or was it I who reached out

But on that night our souls were bare
We moved in perfect harmony
Bodies warm with passion's heat
Pressed together in a hungry embrace
Intertwined we moved as one
Synchronizing to the inner beat
The erotic rhythm of our hearts
Beating in time with the melody
That stole its way from the depths
A harmony of sounds unintelligible
Voiced only by passionate lovers



I couldn't tell the you from me
I must have known you from before
How else could you have reached my core
In life perhaps before this one
What had we shared? What had we done?
I must have loved you in the past


We walk a secret path today
In the moment of our quiet intimacy
Not knowing where this trail will lead
Nor grasping when it ends
We share our private thoughts today
Trusting they'll do no harm
Inner feelings, deep desires
We walk today this special route
And each reach out for the other
Hands and hearts together now
But I knew for sure that I had found love
When I looked into your eyes
And found myself……

Copyright@Motifs2011
Labels: Love, passion, hearts
Picture: Courtesy Google Images





Posted by Motifs at 7:09 PM

51 comments:

  1. Manisha BhatiaDecember 3, 2011 at 7:15 PM

    Voaa!! This is v touching n passionate....

    Lost in love lost in you
    When u became me n I became U!!

    Lovely!!

    Love
    Mani

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  2. Rahul BhatiaDecember 3, 2011 at 7:16 PM

    A passionate, sensuous, melody of love penned beautifully! Truly admirable!

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  3. UnknownDecember 3, 2011 at 7:17 PM

    Breathtakingly Beautiful!...'I couldn't tell you from me...' Oh, what a line!It sums up all!
    -Portia

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  4. MotifsDecember 3, 2011 at 7:27 PM

    @Manisha: Thank you...Love at its best!!

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  5. MotifsDecember 3, 2011 at 7:28 PM

    @Rahul: Thank you..I am touched by your words.

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  6. MotifsDecember 3, 2011 at 7:28 PM

    @Portia: Thank you.

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  7. AmyDecember 3, 2011 at 7:37 PM

    lovely and romantic!

    "And each reach out for the other
    Hands and hearts together now"...

    I read this and believe in forever!

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  8. JANUDecember 3, 2011 at 7:48 PM

    Sensual and lovely.

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  9. MotifsDecember 3, 2011 at 7:51 PM

    @Janu: Thank you so much.

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  10. ApoyandoDecember 3, 2011 at 8:00 PM

    Loved it! Love the ease with which these words were made to carry the depth of their meaning without destroying the tenderness of their emotions..

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  11. Jessica MDecember 3, 2011 at 8:07 PM

    Beautiful! I love it all..the last lines really stand out: I knew for sure that I had found love
    When I looked into your eyes
    And found myself

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  12. Abhishek Ranjith (a.k.a) The NarcissistDecember 3, 2011 at 8:23 PM

    Man I miss my girl friend now. I guess the poem had the intended effect which means you did a great job.

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  13. SimranDecember 3, 2011 at 8:26 PM

    Wonderful and touching! :)
    Your words hold me to your thoughts..
    That's the real art!

    Lot's of love :)

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  14. MotifsDecember 3, 2011 at 9:38 PM

    @Amy: Thank u

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  15. MotifsDecember 3, 2011 at 9:38 PM

    @Janu: Thanks a lot.

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  16. MotifsDecember 3, 2011 at 9:39 PM

    @Apoyando: Thank you for visiting my blog...I try my best.

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  17. MotifsDecember 3, 2011 at 9:40 PM

    @Jessica M...Thank u..your words mean a lot to me.

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  18. MotifsDecember 3, 2011 at 9:41 PM

    @ Abhishek Ranjith: I am glad I could do that you..thank u for visiting my blog.

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  19. MotifsDecember 3, 2011 at 9:42 PM

    @Simran: thank u sweetheart.

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  20. Martha Jane OrlandoDecember 3, 2011 at 10:35 PM

    Passionate, sensual, and absolutely beautiful! Your words mesmerized me . . .
    Blessings!

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  21. BongoDecember 3, 2011 at 10:49 PM

    a mirror...I in you..you in me....Loving you...As always...XOXOXOXO

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  22. Dangerous LindaDecember 3, 2011 at 10:57 PM

    reminds me of my 'mirror, mirror' post ;-)

    my favorite lines: 'We walk a secret path today, In the moment of our quiet intimacy, Not knowing where this trail will lead, Nor grasping when it ends...'

    reminds me to appreciate this moment with my love because i don't know if there will be another.

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  23. MotifsDecember 3, 2011 at 11:10 PM

    @Martha: I am honored by your words,thank u.

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  24. MotifsDecember 3, 2011 at 11:11 PM

    @Bonnie: You know what I mean..thank u.

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  25. MotifsDecember 3, 2011 at 11:12 PM

    @Linda:I feel the same..thank u for coming here.

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  26. RimlyDecember 3, 2011 at 11:28 PM

    This reminds me of the line " I am you and you are me". You speak the language of one soul mate talking of another. Beautiful Alpana

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  27. MotifsDecember 3, 2011 at 11:39 PM

    @Rimly: Thank you...I wrote what I was feeling...

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  28. photos by janDecember 4, 2011 at 4:08 AM

    Beautiful story of love, reminds me of Randy and I. Never knowing when it will end keeps me loving and appreciative everyday. This is so beautifully written. Thank you.

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  29. The PoetDecember 4, 2011 at 7:39 AM

    Hello.
    This is the kind of poem to read on a late evening with the one you hold dear. It's sensuous, full of passion & can warm any soul reading it.
    You expressed this very well Alpana & your image is spot on perfect.
    Thanks for sharing & visiting. Your comments are appreciated.

    My latest:
    More Fulfilling With Love

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  30. DefiantDecember 4, 2011 at 9:38 AM

    Amaaazingg poem!! Loved the way you expressed the feelings..:)

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  31. MotifsDecember 4, 2011 at 9:57 AM

    @Jan: Thank u...

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  32. MotifsDecember 4, 2011 at 9:58 AM

    @Andy: I am happy you liked it,and you will understand,being such a romantic soul .

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  33. MotifsDecember 4, 2011 at 9:59 AM

    @Madhumati: Thank you for visiting my blog,and your comment.

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  34. N JDecember 4, 2011 at 3:20 PM

    Another passionate poem from your heart. Loved the way it was written. Great choice of words!

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  35. MadhushaDecember 4, 2011 at 3:22 PM

    WOW! Beautifully written...

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  36. Melissa TandocDecember 4, 2011 at 3:23 PM

    I've actually forgotten how it felt like. Or if I ever saw myself in somebody. But the poem spoke to my heart just like those days when I read it to somebody special.

    Oh love moves in mysterious ways ;)

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  37. fantasy in practicalityDecember 4, 2011 at 3:25 PM

    it was a musical fusion of two souls in words........wonderfully crafted passion of two loving mates.

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  38. MotifsDecember 4, 2011 at 4:39 PM

    @NJ: Thank you...you are my best inspiration..

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  39. MotifsDecember 4, 2011 at 4:39 PM

    @ Madhusha :Thank u for visiting my blog..

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  40. MotifsDecember 4, 2011 at 4:40 PM

    @Melissa:Love will find a way to your heart..And I truly believe that.

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  41. MotifsDecember 4, 2011 at 4:41 PM

    @Sancheeta: Thank u

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  42. baldychazDecember 4, 2011 at 7:56 PM

    Wow mate ;)

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  43. rishiDecember 5, 2011 at 9:35 AM

    nice.. good use of rhymes...
    Rishi

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  44. UnknownDecember 5, 2011 at 10:04 AM

    Beautifully written, you wear the words of love well. I am always taken back to once upon a time when I read your poems.

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  45. Megha SarinDecember 5, 2011 at 1:35 PM

    Very beautiful poem... Intense and passionate.

    Love
    http://www.meghasarin.blogspot.com

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  46. AnonymousDecember 5, 2011 at 6:38 PM

    "In me shall sleep the rivers' hungry lust and the ocean's tireless waiting" Kamala Das

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  47. Christy GeraldDecember 5, 2011 at 8:40 PM

    Adorably written.Luv it.Glad to follow U.

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  48. NelietaDecember 6, 2011 at 5:21 AM

    Beautiful and passionate - only you can write such a delicious poem!

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  49. Shashidhar SharmaDecember 8, 2011 at 11:36 AM

    Its beautiful.. i could relate to it...


    Shashi
    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/12/whispers-buddha-song.html
    At Twitter @VerseEveryDay

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  50. jessica BrantDecember 9, 2011 at 4:37 AM

    Alpana,

    So very passionate....

    xoxoxxo

    Jessica

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  51. Rohit_blogger at http://floating-expressions.blogspot.in/December 10, 2011 at 1:35 AM

    This is lovely depiction of love/crush at first glance !enjoyed reading...lovely imagery created by your words.

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