Hey another Poe-A-Tree Hop!
Hey another Poe-A-Tree Hop!
Well here we are going again just hopping all over the world. As you may know the last hop we were looking at the rainbows. Saw some mighty pretty ones two. But to have a rainbow you need a little rain. So this time, get you a box of Kleenex or a supply of crying towels cause were going to have a down pour of tears causing poem and tear jerking story for you to read. As you dry your eyes please leave a sympathy note in the comments. There a list of blogs that is participating in this hop below the poem and or story. Have fun and cry your eyes out you will feel better. It good for you, Mikey like it.
This is a dedication to a special friend....you know who you are,thank you for being there for me...bearing up with all that I have to say...Stay with me...
This is a dedication to a special friend....you know who you are,thank you for being there for me...bearing up with all that I have to say...Stay with me...
SILENCE
The choices we have to make are hard, and at times the decision is something that no one should ever have to make - the choice between love and priorites....
Roy Durham http://royd-spiltmilk.blogspot.com/
Rimly Bezbaruah http://rimlybezbaruah.blogspot.com/
Alpana Jaiswal http://motifsonthewall.blogspot.com/
Bonnie Parker Gayadeen http://bongoisme.blogspot.com/
I sit here crying
Asking why me
Asking why me
The pain is so intense
It just does not stop
I feel hopeless, scared, and alone
I feel hopeless, scared, and alone
It is hurting more than a cut or a wound
Simply ripping me apart
Why do I sleep with tears in my eyes
I remember the day your words gave into sentences
Striking me,chilling me to my bones
My tears didn’t stop pouring down my face
I can’t talk to you anymore
I have to walk out of that door
Why am I still holding on to someone who is not mine
No one truly knows
Who I am, because I don’t want them too
No one senses my fears
Who I am, because I don’t want them too
No one senses my fears
Because of my brave front
No one can see I’m losing my sanity
Because, I simply don’t want to show
Because, I simply don’t want to show
No one can see my tears
Because it’s hiding behind my smiling face
Because it’s hiding behind my smiling face
I want to say goodbye to everything
Yet,why can’t I let go
While I was crying my heart out
Didn’t you feel my pain
Does my life hold any meaning to you anymore
I am crying
You are watching me do it
Silently
No words are said
The sobs will stop
Will you care.......
Copyright@Motifs2011
Labels: Silence, tears, pain
Participating blogs: click on one and make the hop to another puddle of tears.
In no particle order:
In no particle order:
Roy Durham http://royd-spiltmilk.blogspot.com/
Rimly Bezbaruah http://rimlybezbaruah.blogspot.com/
Alpana Jaiswal http://motifsonthewall.blogspot.com/
Bonnie Parker Gayadeen http://bongoisme.blogspot.com/
Melissa Tandoc http://www.grazieadio.blogspot.com
Jessica Mokrzycki http://ascendingthehills.blogspot.com/
sarah-jane klemis http://almostthere.biz/
Jessica Mokrzycki http://ascendingthehills.blogspot.com/
sarah-jane klemis http://almostthere.biz/
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I truly hope this is just a poem and not a cry for help!
ReplyDeleteYou need to let go in order to let in!!!
http://jpweddingphotograpy.blogspot.com/2011/07/clouds-my-images-poem-by-rod-mckuen.html
Pour your heart out Alpana. I'm listening to every tear drop you shed. I hold your hand til you say you're ready. I am here.
ReplyDeleteI care soul sis...sooo much for you. And I can hear you crying inside despite the laughters we shared together. You can never hide your pain from me. I sense it... I feel you... because I love you.
ReplyDeleteI wish he knows...he sees...he gives a damn to your feelings.
Cry soul sis... and I'll wipe them for you... We embrace you... I pray for your healing...
Wow, thank you. I woke up this morning wanting and needing to cry and just couldn't quite get there. Sobbing uncontrollably now thanks to your poem. Thank you!
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touching silence...
ReplyDeleteAlpana, what a sad and heartbreaking poem! I feel your pain and can see your tears. Be strong and face the world, it gets better after a while.Time heals all wounds...take care
ReplyDeleteI wish I could just appreciate this for what it is - wonderfully written...but it touches me at a different level too, to know that you are hurting so bad...I'm here for you anytime you want to chat. Love you, Alpana.
ReplyDeletealpana let the tears roll close your and look through the fog see you love that are there feel the love they have for love let your soul heal with the love that is with in. god bless this is great and wonderful poem.
ReplyDeleteHeart,we will forget him!
ReplyDeleteYou and I, tonight!
You may forget the warmth he gave
I will forget the plight!
.....Tears are more valuable than pearls,please don't waste them on those who don't deserve even a simple,'Hi'.
...PORTIA
LET YOUR TEARS BE THE RAIN.THE HEAVY HEART NEEDS TO DRIZZLE,WIPE AWAY YOUR PAIN,CLEAR YOUR EYES TO SEE THE BRIGHT LIGHT THAT THE FUTURE HOLDS, THE BEST ALWAYS DESERVES THE BEST.SO THERE IS YET SOMEONE TO CARE, HOLD YOUR HAND AND WALK WITH YOU IN YOUR EVERY SPHERE,YET SOMEONE TO TRANSFORM YOUR TEARS OF LONELINESS TO TEARS OF CARING AND HAPPINESS.
ReplyDeleteI HOLD YOUR HAND AND PRAY TILL YOU MEET THE DESTINY THAT MAKE YOU SMILE ALL THROUGH YOUR LIFE'S REST.
Another touching poem... I don't know if I have mentioned this before but when I read some of your poems and writings I walk away with tears streaming down my face not only can I feel the pain you write about... but it reminds me ...
ReplyDeleteA Touching Silence !
ReplyDeleteI felt it's all about my life and sadness too, which is hidden in silence and missing someone too.
ReplyDeleteI can't say anything more, but I know you can understand and feeling the pain too.
Alpana...if this loss brings so much pain, it is not worth the sorrow...you have so much to give. You are a gifted writer, powerful words, coming from experience. This is how you heal. I too feel your pain and sadness..it is a pain to the core. You must have loved so deeply. Now give this love to yourself. Every comment on this post is a pearl of wisdom to help you to move throught this. So much love and caring coming to you. I too have lived this and I am here to tell you.."This too shall pass". You are destined for better things...only when you let go can you begin to attract that which you seek. I am here for you...anytime. Know you are loved!
ReplyDeleteI feel the pain..I understand it..I am here....As always...XOXOXXO
ReplyDeletepoignant.. :(
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why didn¡¯t I come across this article earlier!!! pretty useful!!!
ReplyDeleteKeep me away from the wisdom which does not cry, the philosophy which does not laugh and the greatness which does not bow before children. ~Kahlil Gibran
ReplyDeleteTo Alpana, a beautiful soul writing heartfelt verses.
pain hurts....
ReplyDeleteBeing alone is one of the hardest feelings. It can numb the heart. But you have all you need to find joy, self-worth and love...you have the amazing soul that consists of you, and you have the presence of God already in your heart. I'm praying that His presence unfolds itself within you like a flower unfurling. Releasing a joy, peace and happiness that dries up those tears and perhaps produces new ones...ones of healing, sweeping away the pain and leaving your heart free and clear for new beginnings.
ReplyDeleteSad and deep poem - Please tell me this was just for the sake of this post...
ReplyDeleteThis is such a deep poem and I feel like crying with you! Such a terrible feeling to let go...
ReplyDeleteGrief of any kind is painful. Part of healing is expressing the feeling. Something you do beautifully.<3
ReplyDeletehope this is just a poem!
ReplyDeleteAlapana, I know this poem is meant to be for someone and you have expressed the pain and waiting in this poem so lucidly. Very expressive. Loved it.
ReplyDeleteyou write hurtful poems and it can even make the reader cry such sharp words/phraes..nice blog by the way
ReplyDeletegood luck
Hi Alpana,
ReplyDeleteVery well expressed the pain within , and also the flow is also nice.
Sad, but emotions are well expressed though silently but emotions are better expressed when we write and u did it :)
Take care.
ATB :)
oh how i have missed your blog lady, so touching and brings back emotions i have buried in the past.
ReplyDeleteThe release of tears is usually a good thing, it's a sign of moving on. Yet these sorrowful words in their movement stay put, each tear holds fast not releasing but tormenting, a fixed reminder of was and what is.
ReplyDeletePowerful words Alpana oxox
When a tree falls in the forest and nobody is around to hear it, does it make a sound?
ReplyDeleteWhen tears fall from a yearning heart and nobody is there to wipe them do they go unnoticed?
Tears speak louder than any shout ever could and someone somewhere is always listening.
Lovely poem Alpana. xoxo
This is written with so much pain, and of course the hope of finding the shine through another smile. Very well written. Silence, at times convey the message louder than any words may fail. You have portrayed this poem really well. Cheers!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your wonderful comments and the immense love you have all shown...any kind of pain is worth it.because I have such a great support system...
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